Comments on: What harm can a package cause? http://rape--stories.com/2009/04/09/what-harm-can-a-package-cause/ Rape Stories that will rock your world and blow your mind! Fri, 10 Feb 2012 08:10:50 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.2.2 By: Jon Maddux http://rape--stories.com/2009/04/09/what-harm-can-a-package-cause/#comment-832 Jon Maddux Sun, 12 Apr 2009 04:59:48 +0000 http://rape--stories.com/2009/04/09/what-harm-can-a-package-cause/#comment-832 I am not one to typically comment on a story based on syntax but in this case the spelling errors detracted so much from the fluid reading of the story it was hard to really get into it. If you rewrite it and use entire words instead of highschool texting syntax, ie. please instead of PLZ, and the correct words, ie. using "no" when you are intending to use "know" the story would be a pretty good read. Jon I am not one to typically comment on a story based on syntax but in this case the spelling errors detracted so much from the fluid reading of the story it was hard to really get into it.

If you rewrite it and use entire words instead of highschool texting syntax, ie. please instead of PLZ, and the correct words, ie. using “no” when you are intending to use “know” the story would be a pretty good read.

Jon

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